Tasty

The saturation of instruments in the beginning throws off the spareness in the middle, but pretty sweet except for that slight problem with the arrangement.

Yeah

I like it, but for a hip-hop track it needs a defineable hook and verse structure. With a bpm of about 140 I would say that this is more of a dnb track.
Pretty good melodies, and it's progressive, which is always good for a hip-hop track instead of a 2 bar loop for days.
However, I think hip-hop needs more rhythm and bass. Always more bass.
But I guess that's just my opinion.